[quote=Sen] [...] Would adding "[i]and his bulging muscles[/i]" be too much? [/quote] Only if you don't add the necessary background sparkles such an action is by law required to be accompanied by. [quote=SwordfishKnight] *Writer's Block intensifies*But in all seriousness, I got nothing. I'm trying to brainstorm, but nothing is coming around. I don't know how to extend something about running into a paragraph. [/quote] If it helps, you could get Toma and Kotori involved, seeing as they're in the mall too right now.