[quote=DAWNSTAR] I like the character and all but having all the abilities of Rokushiki. Perhaps removing one or two would be good. I would suggest getting rid of Rankyaku Kyanon and Shigan Kyanon. Shigan is more of a piercing type of ability which requires a sharp point. Developing it into a blunt force weapon would take quite a bit of time to perfect. As for Rankyaku Kyanon, a move like that is similar to when Zoro uses Mutoryu and seems a bit too powerful. A move like that would posses both the speed of Shigan and the cutting power of Rankyaku which would then negate the supposedly 'blunt' damage by Shigan. Kyanon. It just ignores the principle of Shigan Kyanon to even use Rankyaku Kyanon. Anyway, I've been thinking of restyling the whole idea. Been looking into a different time setting. Something more in the future with a higher tech style. Something more than just muskets that the One Piece world naturally has. Say, a more modern setting. Pirates still exist and such, better weaponry, more room to grow and the possibility of a larger organization than the World Government. [/quote] Fair enoough. They shall be removed. And I don't know about the chaning of settings. You should be careful regarding that.