Okay ... I think the CS can be accepted Stella
Just a few things to keep in mind
Katana skills (weapon skills) are not chosen. They are simply unlocked as proficiency of the [b]<<Extra-Skill Katana>>[/b] (Although in our case not an extra skill) levels up. More Katana skills will become available. 
So I didn't read your skill set properly, but I am going to have to say you need to cross reference your skill list with someone else's character like Fujiwara of PKMNB0Y.

Also, be wary about when you end up making IC posts about towns.
[quote]
Players with orange cursors are unable to enter villages or streets that have the «Area» effect on. If they try to get into these areas, they will be attacked by NPC guards until they leave the affected area.[9] In order for an orange player to move between floors, they must either walk from floor to floor or use teleportation or corridor crystals.[/quote]
As it says here, some towns an areas will not be available for you to enter, and you cannot go between floors with the town teleport (refer to the thing in episode 8 of SAO that Asuna and Kuradeel use if you don't know what I mean)

For now, I guess it is probably best to say, you can enter all towns, except Tolbana and Town of Beginnings.

Edit:
There's quite a time inconsistency with the thing about Yui and Timi arriving to Tolbana earlier than Suki and Umichi, considering the other two are over an hour away by foot, and they traveled by foot, with Suki and Umichi being at the town closest to Tolbana.