I would also like to put it out there, i think we should make a new thread.
Reasons why: 
Dawnstar has no control over the starting OC so he cannot make changes.
I don't think i can play the role i gave to Edge and would like to adjust him so he's not a dick.
We don't have to make Dawnstar's character an NPC if we start a new one. 
So i think a new thread would be best. Bu in the same time period.