[quote=Kissu]
Changed some typos and awkward phrasing. That's what happens when you're still half-asleep from night shifts. =_=Also, I'm relinquishing my rights to sleuth. My theories were wildly off-base regarding Noboru thus far. Hell, apparently one of my theories is the complete of the truth somehow. But cry moar, Kissu. Cry moar.
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Twasn't that terribly bad. You hit a lot of key points and built off of something that had very little to begin with.