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quick post up. Not thrilled with it, Kinda lost the flow part way into it. Ah well
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I thought it was fine. I thought some parts of it were funny.

Kyle: Ronnie, could you please leave? I'm trying to talk to one of my childhood friends, who I probably [i]should[/i] be dating, about my latest girlfriend, who recently left without saying anything but just even more recently resurfaced out of the blue.

Ronnie: No.

Kyle is such a chick magnet. Do I smell a love polygon in the works. lol