Oh I am not going to change what you are writing, just why she followed him. X'D but I am sure you will like it. 

Honestly I wasn't seeing them as bitter rivals, like freindamies? But sure I don't mind. As long as my character isn't portrayed as supper defenseless and weak. People have done that before and it bugs me. She clearly has struggles, but I also want her to be very good at having quick reactions in hand to hand combat.