[quote=Lalliman]
As for my commentary on Tharraleos:As Schradinger already said, there are no concrete levels of his abilities stated. I understand that they’re variable, so I propose this is how you fix it: state the lowest possible level of each ability, how it is when he feel particularly prideless, and state the highest level currently available (seeing as you limited him to tier 4). The things that you need to specify this way are:- Strength, speed and durability- The size, speed, fire rate and accuracy of his razor wind attack- The range and power of his breath attack- The power of his ground slam (in terms of what effect it has on people)- The speed at which he travels through the groundTwo more minor things:- You should probably put a range limit on telekinesis. Otherwise his telescope eyes allow him to use it from miles away. Then again, that probably won’t come up in this arena, so I can overlook it if you insist.- You mention the razor wind attack can cut metal, but metal is far too general of a term to be of use. Steel is probably what you mean.
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Alrighty, I was going to edit the actual profile, but things are rather tedious with a mobile device. As such, could I simply list these prerequisites separately? 

Maximum strength and speed are already accounted for with the tier 4, being 10 tons of force maximum (which can potentially tie in with durability as well) with mach 1 being the top speed. Minimum I'll say 500 pounds and 150 mph.

As for his air related abilities; the size and fire rate of the razor wind will stay consistent, in which they're 2 feet wide and can launch these once per 15 seconds. The speed can range from 200 mph minimum to 600 mph maximum. The range of the breath can range from a minimum of 15 feet to 150 feet maximum. The force of it can range from 50 pounds of force, to 200.

Onto the earth related abilities. The tremor has the same effect on people no matter what power level he's at. It always serves as a means to cause imbalance. That's not to say it can't destroy the area around him, but what happens then varies on the location. The speed at which he travels through the ground I'll make simple and simply state he travels at half the speed as normal.

Since putting a range on the Telekinesis doesn't seem to be mandatory, I'll leave it as is. I'll be sure not to overuse that ability nor overly exploit it. 

And finally, yes, I did indeed mean steel instead of metal.

With all that, I believe it's everything. If any problems or concerns arise, feel free to let me know