*blushes* Wow, you flatter me way, way too much..

And yeah, I figured the alliance between all four of the hunting party is going to be somewhat shaky - not least of all because the reward would be hard to split! So some tension is totally acceptable. But since our characters are archer, witch (yours), mage, sellsword (mine), we can safely assume that they're all fairly capable of combat - excepting perhaps the witch, but that's at your discretion. However, for the mage and witch to look down on their less-magically-able companions wouldn't be surprising - mages in particular tend to be a bit snobbish around low-level wixes and petty magicians (as well as clique-y but that comes with the territory).

As for the paragraph length - I understand. I actually asked because I've known people who have difficulty reading very long paragraphs or posts without breaks in them, and was like 'Shoot I need to be more accommodating if that's something Genkai needs, too' and so asked. Never hurts to be mindful of others.