[quote=Malikoy]
 This RP will be based on the original Dracula with an alternative take to his story, but the character is still Stoker's. Same history and everything. In the original novel Dracula was killed, in this RP it will be brought up through story how he came back. The RP takes place in modern Transylvania, Romania. Your character is very interesting, and I liked the effort creating it, it is more than likely you will be accepted! As for the story bit with Dracula I liked what you did, and you may keep it, even Renee's daughter is quite a good addition. But please change it so that it is Lord Dracula, I know in the original novel he was a count, but it is modern times now and he changed his title to a Lord. For hypnotism just keep it balanced and use it sparingly IC and we should be good! :)
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All right, nice to know it will be keeping with classics (assuming I get accepted :p). Also thanks for the character compliment! And I'll change it to Lord right away. Wasn't sure before, so I just stuck with what I knew. And no worries with the hypnotism; I'll limit its use as much as possible.