Looks pretty good... a couple of critiques though. -I don't quite see where the thunderbolts fit in with creation and healing and the sun and all that. -What exactly does his sceptre do? What's it for? -I'm not sure what sort of age civilization will be, but if it's a sort of medieval era, 40 million is a LOT of people. The entire continent of Europe only had about 50 million in 1450. -All generative forces is quite broad. I'm not saying you should change it yet, but make it tentative until we have more characters. If the other gods are significantly weaker, some changes might be necessary. -His goal, by definition, would be defensive, wouldn't it? Wanting to protect humanity? Those are just some things to think about. The OOC isn't even up yet, so no worries about your character right now. I'll wait for just one more person and I'll make the OOC. More people will still be allowed to join after that, of course.