drallinix: really going with your fighting style Hieledran would be the best, but that does require a bit of bio changing to fit, but if you just want to change the nation feel free to choose any you want.

BKburke: Only thing I see is the amount of magic you control. In the magic section I stated 3 points in magic to start. So I would say Journeyman in Enchantment, then Novice in one other element and not being able to dabble in multiple elements at the time. Other than that I would say he looks good.