I understand. I'm gonna get started on my Mako portion but I got no sleep last night. Went to bed at 1, got up about 4:30, kept drifting in and out, wasn't fun. If I see the writing suffer I'm gonna resume tomorrow morning, you deserve better than one paragraph or two right? XP Plot really depends on our angle, but I assume you want the student - teacher relationship to enter romantic territory. Either the conflict of the story is ongoing or everything is resolved (Sasuke) and all that's left is character building.