Sounds good and keep 'em rolling in. Just bear in mind that the characters ought to have their hard edges somewhere -- this is a brutal and bleak sort of world. Dara is civilized, but it has problems, not the least of which are indentured servants, labor disputes and immigration-related problems. They also have unpleasant neighbors and the trade routes are something to get cutthroat over. PS: I might also be switching Dara's position on the world map, but the city map is fundamentally done. If anyone's more artistic than I, they can always draw a more interesting rendering than I put up.