[quote=Mr Nim]
Took me a bit longer than I expected but here! Its done :D__________________________________
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Alright... it looks good, but there are a few things that concern me. First is her Shifter appearance. I feel like a lightning-covered humanoid figure is a bit off considering what the Thunderbird is portrayed to actually look like. My suggestion would be this: A humanoid body, a pair of wing-like arms, or perhaps just a pair of wings on her back? Hawk-like eyes and with a few other bird-like characteristics--and sparks of lightning occasionally dancing across her body. There are legends of the Thunderbird taking human shape, so I think something like this would be possible. You'd also be allowed to fly if you really want to. She [i]is[/i] a bird-like Shifter after all. Perhaps claw-like hands as well? Just an idea, but I request a change in appearance as it doesn't quite fit with the legends and myths. [url=http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/122/3/c/harpy_warrior_by_uniquelegend-d4ycru4.jpg]I imagine something like this if her wings are still on her arms.[/url] Or perhaps [url=http://www.deviantart.com/art/Harpy-199596272]something like this[/url] if her wings are on her back. 

Another thing that I took note of—and something I never thought I'd actually say—is that she's actually underpowered. Compared to the rest of us and what I see as the standard for Worlds Collide, Melina is actually too weak. Considering how she's focused on commanding some of Nature's forces, I'd say she'd belong to the Fae class (please add that after "Shifter Form - Thunderbird"). She'd have incredible amount of power; being able to call down lightning and zap people with thunderbolts from afar. 

She'd a high-power, medium-mobility type of Shifter. So while her abilities will eventually drain her, she's capable of much more than what you write. Also, since she's the "sorcerer" she's able to control the lightning. She can sort of "point" at a place, and lightning will strike there, or she can fire it from her own body. The choice is hers. So no "exhausted" after sending out a thunderbolt or two, and definitely not exit her Shifter form. You could easily give her some more power, and if it gets too much I'll just give you a poke :) 

Now... there is one thing that really bugs me, and that is actually a part of her powers: While a person may become a bit faster, stronger, or tougher after becoming a Shifter, they do [i]not[/i] become cleverer. She'll be just as intelligent after as she was as before. Becoming a Shifter affects your body and allows you to come in contact with your dormant magic, but not your mind.