[quote=Kidd] There wasn't really "Spanish" as we know it now 8,000 years ago... I'd change it to Latin or something, lol. Being 8,000 would be mean he existed before a lot of the modern nations. a quick reference for BCE Europe. But yeah, he could definitely know Spanish and English, along with many other languages. There weren't Neanderthals 8,000 years ago...only modern humans, albeit shorter (Modern humans aren't descended from Neanderthals anyway.) As for the powers/magic/etc: I think you should drop the pyrokinesis as vampires are weak to fire. There isn't really a reason for them to control it.He doesn't need both the magical fedora and the magic around his body for the sun. Pick one or the other. I also recommend dropping a few weapons--he doesn't need all those with his power to begin with. [/quote] I know, I noticed my timeline mistake in the shower, changing his age to 15,000 and editing neandorthal to primative humans Also, he's supposed to be Spanish, that's the character. Fire is there because he can control it, vampires ARE weak to fire thus why he controls it. Er, I need the weapons, this is my fantasy character adapted for this RP. Do I HAVE to let go of my extra weapons? And pyrokinesis? EDIT: Edited age and the tineline error in Bio, I chose magic around me as a magic hat makes me more vulnerable.