@Anybody related to the Jawa discussion: No Jawas. 1. Too difficult to incorporate 2. Too far-fetched. 3. Nobody would want to rp with a Jawa.

@TheunKnowable: You have to rework it quite a bit, everything up to the appearance is fine (age range is still being thought through). But after that it gets a bit screwy, Anakin Sky- I mean Mott Faze's history is a bit weird and needs to be reworked, stay away from main characters as much as possible due to god-modding and consistency issues. So that means no personally trained by Luke WinWalker. Your personality needs to be more in-depth and strengths/weaknesses need to be expanded. If you clean it up that would also be great, formatting and the like.

@Platinum: Similar issues with Know, you have re-format and elaborate on some parts, personality, strengths, and weaknesses. Remember to expand into your backstory as the rp goes on.

Everyone, somethings I have noticed about the two cs so far is the amount written. Please write at least more than a couple of sentences for personality, backstory, etc. Also, keep your cs neat, Add bold to your headings and subheadings, add spaces between sections, stuff like that. Also, on the topic of age, every race is different, so find an age you feel is mature enough to be a padawan but not so old as to become a knight. For example, races with human like cycles will range from 13-20s range while longer lifespan races will have 30-50 years (just an example). Get those cs' out as soon as you can!