[quote=Zeroes]
@TheunKnowable: You have to rework it quite a bit, everything up to the appearance is fine (age range is still being thought through). But after that it gets a bit screwy, Anakin Sky- I mean Mott Faze's history is a bit weird and needs to be reworked, stay away from main characters as much as possible due to god-modding and consistency issues. So that means no personally trained by Luke WinWalker. Your personality needs to be more in-depth and strengths/weaknesses need to be expanded. If you clean it up that would also be great, formatting and the like.
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Wasn't personally trained, just found and transported to the Yavin moon. Other than that, do you want me to cut out the possible connection to Kenobi? I figured that was plausible, as he was there for 19 years. He's forbidden from forming connections, not sworn to celibacy.