[quote=Iryhor]
Vecatrius, looks pretty good, but the cornerstone of this roleplay is drawing power from your followers. That's your MAIN source of power. You can draw from other things, but mostly your power derives from your followers. That should be the driving force of your character. So, some alterations are necessary.Sorry for not getting to him sooner, I saw a WIP on him and never noticed getting anything from you telling me he was done.Also, apologies for being so slow lately. Got a new job and I come home crawling every day.Anyways, keep at it everyone. I'll get to reading the rest of the IC that I haven't read later today. :)
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Added a tag line about his followers.
I'll work on drafting his Chosen later. I plan on having the Current Chosen die, and thus require a new Chosen to continue on.