Nooo, don't take it offensively! You just use a CS format more suitable for IC progress (which makes sense cause you're RPing a 12-13 year old, what kinda history do they have) but for a jonin I don't think I can write a cohesive story that makes sense. :p The reason you piqued my interest was actually simply cause I liked the way you set up the OOC, so don't take this as an insult to your organisation skills. 

As for the remark about me reading the OOC, well, I've been in a few naruto RP's, co GMed a lot of them and I simply assumed that multiple characters of 1 clan were allowed. That was my mistake. However after giving it some thought I don't think I can create a good clan myself (I've done so before and they all end up the same because I hate kekkei genkai) and I can't stand the Inuzuka. 

That all being said I do wanna leave on a good note, you guys have made a pretty good thread here. Just make sure to keep it going. I'll check it regularily whenever I see it pop up so I'm definetely interested to see what you guys manage to make out of this.