@Theunknowable: It doesn't flow and you screwed up some grammar. Doesn't matter really. And no, you don't need to make a cs for your master, name and short description is fine.

@Roxx: No need to make another cs, lol all you needed to do was make a name and a short description. I would prefer you use the kel dor, I find it more interesting and adds more diversity. You can keep Chase though. 

@Sep: Pre war

@New Guy: Sure welcome aboard.