@IncredibleBee: I think the main issue is that his stoic seriousness is the main focus of his character(you didn't really elaborate on anything else) makes him seem rather difficult to interact with in this RP.

A straightman character is fine, but there's a a balance where they need to react to some extent.

That's not to say the RP can't be serious, but there still needs to be good avenues of character interaction for other purposes.

@Descartes: Thank you.