[quote=1Charak2]explain this slowly what i did wrong with this card[/quote]
Effect-wise, nothing really. It's just your OGG (Official Game Grammar) needing correction is all. (Yes, I'm nitpicking. It's not even noon here and I haven't had breakfast yet, so just bear with me here.)

That aside...
@Rethel:
[hider=My review of your cards](Didn't bother with the Speed Spells since I've got faith in your cardmaking abilities)
Alright, the first and only notable "error" I noticed out of the whole lot was that you only added "Man-Eating Black Shark" to the effect text of Man-Eating Caramel; the others still only mention "Man-Eating Treasure Chest" and "Man-Eating Plant". That one aside, I noticed the grammar on two of your Normal Monsters was a little wonky or missing words, and I've listed "corrected" versions below. In addition to these, Aspiring HERO Burnshot's text may want to use "unleashed" in place of "released", as "after his Firespout attack is released" might imply it was sealed away or some such ^_^; but that - as with everything I'm critiquing - is just me nitpicking like crazy.

[b]Dark Magic Scholar:[/b] A student of the "Dark Magician". He has already studied a great deal, but there is yet much left for him to learn.
(The second sentence on this still remains kinda wonky-sounding. I might suggest changing it to "He has already studied a great deal, but there is still much left for him to learn." instead of "yet much left".)

[b]Hundred-Eyes Scorpion:[/b] This scorpion's prey cannot hide from its all-seeing gaze...nor can its predators.
(Using "and nor" is redundant, as "nor" is essentially used as a "negative 'and'" if that makes sense. "And nor can its predators" would almost be like "Its predators can can't hide" or something like that.)

However, they were all greatly balanced, and I look forward to seeing them used in the IC whenever it starts :)[/hider]