Some quick examples of what I fixed or attempted to at least: 

Paul's relationship with Lacus is given a bit more insight and even though the love is very flawed and in my opinion not as written as it should be it is still what it is.

In it I put in Paul was colder and a war monger. That isn't true. Paul while violent in combat doesn't normally enjoy it but he doesn't fight his emotions that tend to agree with fighting another human being either. He fights when he needs to or when he is emotionally unstable.

I explored Jason's past a bit more in the first post but it is nothing worth noting just his own thoughts.

I fixed an error that Strike and Aegis were 'recaptured' during the Battle of London in Paul's verse. In truth OMNI has most of their gundams in Paul's verse.

I added in some minor other stuff that most people probably don't care about. However if we do finish this I want to be at least somewhat coherent. My biggest mistakes so far have not been writing down the names of some pilots and crew members in the OOC. Like having Yuri's name as Boris or the other way around. So to fix that I listed Yuri's last name as Boris instead.