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Just cause I like to be thorough: Whew. Let me know if anything needs to be changed. I hope I did well. I can change her background ground if need be, as I realise it could be seen as...bad. She's been adapted from another character of mine. I hope all the formatting is good. I also wish I had something other then anime to work with, but...I just lost all of my real life photos.
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I like your character, and I think the backstory's fine. That opinion is biased because I have thought up a lot worse ones for my characters. I like to make characters that are fighting inner darkness, and a main cause of that is Traumatic pasts.