[quote=Eviledd1984]
I edited it how does it look now?
[/quote]

Much better. First of all, your character is [i]not[/i] a C rank, they're at least an A or a B but I'll allow Acer or someone else to decide that.

Also, I was thinking about relaunching an interest-check. Should I just repost the OP or rewrite it out?