[quote=NarcissisticPotato]
Much better. First of all, your character is a C rank, they're at least an A or a B but I'll allow Acer or someone else to decide that.Also, I was thinking about relaunching an interest-check. Should I just repost the OP or rewrite it out?
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Well i don't want to make him to OP of course so if he sees anything that needs to be changed then i will change it.