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Appearance: Short, skinny but all muscle, large blue eyes, short black hair,pale skin. Plaid flannel open to a vailent thorr shirt, blue jeans, ragged loafers, and fist wrapsName:Guy funnuchiBirthdate: august first 3000Backstory: A Sicilian boy, who when on to become a skilled martial artist to win money to save his family from the mob. He started out doing savate and bare knuckle boxing and moved on to Asia, then americas. After the war he became a hero, going around doing anything he can to help people. He is hunted by many people, for he rarely ever kills. He is currently running from a gang that wants him dead for saving a young girl from slavery.Starting weapon: thought skilled with most weapons he carries none.Type of social skill: Guy is very good at hand to hand combat and listening.Type of combat skill: he manly excels in savate but is trained in many styles.Type of craft skill: Guy is good at making fire and fire places
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Hi there. Thanks for the interest.

Before I accept your character sheet, things must be done first. You need to add 17 more coherent words in your backstory (it must total to 100, now you have 83.), and you have to clarify your age. You can't be ten years old. That's too young and weak.

Also, your social skill is a little off. Hand to hand combat falls at combat skill and the listening skill is rather vague. Be specific.