[QUOTE=AngelNoire]
Oh yeah and a starfighter thats typically gonna be on autopilot, since the YT clearly wont have the cargo space. Modified Nubian defense craft. Stolen from the planet after the emporor razed Naboo to the ground. The droid is built into the ship, and the color of the external propulsion units (The colorful lines) Can be changed. Further than just being pretty, they add alot of control to the craft by increasing its multi-directional propulsion.[/quote]

Nubian Fighters aren't equipped with hyperdrives. Also mutlidirectional propulsion is typically controlled by repulsor coils that aren't line... They'll be nothing but aesthetic. 

[quote=AngelNoire]
 Kind of Blew up a squandron of tie fighters because she got mad at a family member and they were just there.[/quote]

When was this? Why? How?

[quote=AngelNoire]
Grand Moff Tarkin thought she would be of better use repaying her debt with several "favors".[/quote]

You wouldn't be dealing with Tarkin. Nosir, no way.

[quote=AngelNoirte]
And although she has no official rank within the empire, it is generally known that most officers under the rank of commander are to defer to her.[/quote] 

The Imps were sticklers for Authority. The only ones who were allowed to show up unannounced and give orders are ISB Agents, Hands, Vader, Moffs and Palps himself.

[quote=AngelNoire]

Her family was a traditional Mandalorian family, all honor, training to be a warrior all the time, her brother was even accepted to be a Black-Sun, and her father was a member of the infamous deathwatch. [/quote]

Death Watch Family ≠ normal Mandalorian life.

[quote=AngelNoire]
as her father was ashamed of his "bastard daughter who drove my sweet T'liah away[/quote]

What? Where did this come from?

I think those are the main things I should point out.