My scuicide charge wAs extremely stupid ^_^ thanks for noticing. I was trying to think of something that would be NEARYLY straight scuicide, and would have been laughable had it worked. On a seperate note, i was expecting LESS powerfull oponents, so i might have to make a different char sheet. Frankly, the teenage girls i entered were the result of 3 days with a total of 2 hours sleep between them. They are totaly useless individually, and together are still only "Eeeehhhhh" compared to other characters. Seriously, my idea for a big attack was refracting Sol's light trough Priroda's crystals for a lazer... That would take several turns to set up, during which time othe people would either destroy them, or lobb off several of their own projectiles. So yeah... Imma get a drawing set up, and a cs going. ------- [quote=Grnmachine] When will light be on? Its been awhile since they last posted... I hope nobody minds if i repost my app. [/quote] I dont know bout light, but im sure that if both us co-gm's accept you you will be able to participate, and upon lights return, make any corrections he ask for. What i recommend you change on your cs sheet is as follows: [list] [*]Organization- [/*]The powers are a big bulking paragraph. Its not necissary, and you will likely be accepted either way, but seperating those abilities the way you did the elemental effects of arrows would greatly help the overall flow of your cs. [*]Pritective skin[/*]- What will it protect against, and to what degree? Will it make you immune to certain effects? Etc. details especially reguarding defenses are crucial in an arena RP. Especially one so broad. The comparison you made of tempered steel was great to describe physical resistance. [*]The Scythe-[/*] I have a few comments reguarding the scythe. You mentione its length. Does that referre to blade length, or handle length? My second comment only exist because Heriman exist. Since heriman can alter things with his magic, would your scythe be suseptible to that? [*]Summoning Weapons[/*]- This probably goes without saying, but you should mention that you cant summon a weapon INSIDE someone, and where it CAN be summoned. Dont worry, i often forget this detail as well. [*]The bow-[/*] What speed do the projectiles accelerate at, and can you use multiple elements at once? [*]fire-[/*] How large and hot is the inferno? [*]Ice[/*] How long does the freeze last [*]Earth[/*] How much slower, and how long will it last? [*]Sun[/*]How long will they be blind for? Are there any variables affecting this? [*]Moon[/*] Again, how long will this last. How powerfull are the hallucinations? Are they psycosomatic (so powerfull that what they do ACTUALLY EFFECTS the victim. Getting hit by one is actually getting hit). [*]Other-[/*] The ther section is bunched into your history section. I advice hitting enter 1-3x to space that out, or simply removing it. [/list]