[quote=Grnmachine] Thanks for the criticism notdeadyet. I'll work on my CS when i can, and it would be great it you drew my charecters for me, but lets do it via PM. I dont always trust people with my email. [/quote] WHOLLY SHYT! I WAS TALKING OUT MY ASS WHILST EXHAUSTED AND TRYING TO SOUND INTELLIGENT! XD I reread that now, and i may be exhausted, but besides spelling errors, i feel pretty durn gud about that critique xD. Glad to help man! How bout you pm me more details of the characters, ill draw them to the best of my ability and slap em on my devianart account? (jynxs131312) yes thats a two on the end, that is in fact not a typo, though it was when i originally created the account. You may check out my previous drawings there. Speaking of which, i have drawings that i need to add to there, so you can see some more rescent works. --------- Soooo i just thought, and this is mostly for Light, though anybody may add critique. What if, for this arena, we added a "requirement." What I mean is, this is a religious RP technically. Our characters fight for a god of sorts right? Most religions have practices that are expected to be followed. What if we had requirements that our characters must meet, in order to apease their gods, or two actually earn them honor? For example, priroda and Sol MUST perform a combo attack in every fight, or Herriman must change weapons at least twice, or something of the nature? These wouldnt necissarily hinder ourcharacters, but would help us more the less stay truthfull to the concepts and gods for which our characters were created. Also, someone needs to make a champion for Alduin. XD