We're [i]extremely[/i] skeptical to that character. But of course the decision is yours, HeySeuss... Using our understanding of the sheet, we ran it through a Mary Sue Litmus test. The score ended up at 92 (or 142, depending on a single uncertain point). A listing of what the point amounts count for is here: [hider=here]0-5 Points Fanfiction & MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: If your score isn't this low from clicking several De-Suifiers, it may be possible that your character is poorly-developed yet, or a potential Anti-Sue or Hood Ornament. 5-16 Points Fanfiction & MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: Very low chance your character is a Mary Sue. Usually a very safe range to be in. 17-21 Points Fanfiction: Low-to-moderate chance your character is a Mary Sue. Generally a safe range to be in. MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: Low chance your character is a Mary Sue. 22-29 Points Fanfiction: Moderate-to-high chance your character is a Mary Sue. Still a safe-ish range to be in. MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: Low-to-moderate chance your character is a Mary Sue. 30-35 Points Fanfiction & MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: High-to-very high chance your character is a Mary Sue. Risky range to be in. 36-49 Points Fanfiction & MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: Extremely high chance your character is a Mary Sue. VERY risky range. 50+ Points Fanfiction & MMO/RPG/Original Fiction: Your character is almost certainly a Mary Sue, and a bad one at that. On the odd chance that xe isn't, it's most likely you didn't read the instructions properly (some people don't do this, which causes freakishly high scores). If it's the latter case, read the instructions and take the test again. [/hider] [url=http://www.springhole.net/writing/powerful-not-sues.htm]Here's something you can use to improve the character[/url]