1) Master at 30, I can kinda live with. Though nowhere near the council level.

Alright. 

2) Remove this "Class" thing. Follow the format on the OP please.

Sure...

3) Far too many abilities, not to mention two of them are rare abilities.

Sure..

4) Samurai? What are they? Are they a type of food? Also too sentimental for a Jedi Master.

I inserted Samurai as a homage to George Lucas inspiration for the Jedi. It doesn't hurt anything. 

Lolz Too Sentimental? What? 

5) No Jedi Lovers in this time period. No-No Nope. Not son of two Jedi. Only Jedi allowed to produce offspring were off extinct races or races with peculiar reproductive systems.

Sure. 

6) How doth one obtain such a deep connection to the Order? It wouldn't be a family link.

It isn't a family link. It's a notion that such masters have been loyal to the Order for years. 

7) Jedi are required to find their own crystal for their lightsaber, it's part of the trials. Such has been canon for this era for a long time.

Fine. I don't see the problem so much with that as not every Jedi has or will get the exact same but fine. 

8) Well no to Mace Windu taking an interest. 

Okay

9) Initiate trials are simple, Jedi Code and understanding, crystal and lightsaber, basic combative test.

The second was not consistent throughout the Order's history. Originally, the test consisted of lightsaber construction using crystals provided by the master. As the Order came into a new era following the Ruusan Reformation, the trial was altered to test self-discipline. Demonstrating competency through meditation or staged lightsaber combat with a hood, this test was not so much a demonstration in skill so much as technique.

^ From the wiki itself. I know how the trials go. Instead of combat, I used meditation. 

10) Dark Jedi who managed to beat Mace Windu and his Padawan wouldn't just be left alone.

Except...they can and would be because they are my npcs with their own motives. 

11) Dark Jedi don't typically show mercy.1

I guess this wasn't typical. 

12) Eyes can be healed/replaced by either transplant or cybernetics

That doesn't mean he has to have them.

13) There'd be another trial to go through however right now I can't remember the different parts of the Trials of Knighthood. However I know that one of them is very self reflective that few people ever discuss.

Trials of Knighthood tend to be different at times depending on the jedi.

14) So he's 32 at the end of his history but at the start of the sheet he's 30.
I missed changing the zero to a two. Oops. 

15) I'm not opening this to discussion either, I've done that in the past and just got burned as a result.

I will argue for my character or at least certain points because I got things to back that up and/or just doesn't sit right with me either. Though I'll probably create a whole new character anyway.