That was a lovely read, Bright_Ops. Almost impossible to compare to what it was yesterday. Just a few quick questions... One, you do know that Trandoshan adulthood is 25 years, right? Two, how old was he when he left home and started doing "business"? Three, does he have any skill with Blasters (pistols, rifles, etc)? Is there a reason he's not carrying one? We'll not comment on Prince Potter's character, as Sep already did that. No point in covering it twice. Concerning yours Celeste: A bit skeptical to the idea of a 19-year old being fluent in 8 languages and passable in six more. Its not all that plausible. Especially when you add understanding of several more to the list. Learning languages isn't an easy thing, especially not fluently.