[quote=Balmung1100]. After regaining consciousness, Lamar attempted to re-enter the cave that he was raised in only to be denied by the very rescue team that had saved him. Lamar felt that this was a challenge to what little dignity he had left and attempted to fight his former saviors only to be defeated and taken back to Allure town where he came to the conclusion that he was simply not strong enough. He decided to train himself and one day return to his home to reclaim his pride. His way of training had not truly changed from when he was younger and he still challenged many of the more powerful residents only to be defeated over and over...until one day he realized that the majority of the pokemon that he had been facing were part of the very guild that the rescue team that had saved and defeated him were affiliated with.
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I really have no say in this, but I sort of can predict whether or not something would get accepted. The biggest problem is this paragraph. I know it's hard to avoid the 'i must train' cliche, but instead, make him think he's strong enough just to go to the guild and then maybe in an IC post he can find out he needs to train. Just find out some way to edit that paragraph. If you do that, you'll probably get accepted.