[quote=Skallagrim] I would break it up like this so it is easier to read and identify items clearly. Also I find your bow is a little lacking. Presumably being a Champion of a God you would probably fire an arrow faster than a normal human being. A man with a 70 lb bow can fire an arrow 300 fps or 184 miles per hour. You are just a hair above that. As a Champion I figure you should be able to have the strength to at least match the speed of a .22 lr which is about 1,100 fps which is about 750 mph. I think this would elevate your attack beyond a mere human to at least demi-god status. Also it seems that you are a one-trick pony. Perhaps you can acquire bow skills such as firing three arrows at once, both at a single target or three separate targets. Able to bank an arrow off of something to hit a target, hidden. Fire arrows and use them to climb a wall. Perhaps fire a curtain of arrows that drop dozens of arrows in an area 10 feet by 10 feet. Things to focus your specialization as a bow user. I think your arrows are greatly underpowered for a Champion. Fire, creates an inferno engulfing an area 50 feet by feet 50, reaching a maximum temperature of 2,000 degrees Fahrenheit. Ice arrow creates a frozen mass of air and coating the ground with ice dropping the ambient temperature to -2 degrees Fahrenheit, in an area roughly 50 feet by 50 feet. Earth, creates a mucky sticky bog in a 100 foot by 100 foot area radiating out from where it strikes, greatly slowing even the speediest of Champions until they are clear of the bog. Wind, creates a vortex of tornado winds around the target and engulfing a 50 foot by 50 foot area. The winds reach a maximum sustain speed of 102 miles per hour. The winds are strong enough to challenge the strength of even the heartiest hero to remain standing. Sun, creates a blinding flash of light reaching nearly 100 million lumens that can create after images in the retinas of the view if they look at the flash. . Be aware that Champions with other than optical senses can overcome this easily. Moon, creates a hallucination effect in a 100 foot by 100 foot area. While not adversely affecting the target it distorts distance and creates images similar to a fun house of mirrors. .Lightning, can summon a bolt of lightning that will arc off the arrow toward the nearest grounded target, usually another Champion. A secondary effect that can be used is that the arrow can fork into two separate bolts to strike a target. Rain, when the arrow strikes the area, 100 feet by 100 feet is deluged by a torrential downpour rapidly flooding the area with nearly a ton of water in a matter of moments. You can change the area if you want. But that is just my opinion. [/quote] That all seems like a bit... much. I'd like input from others before i change it to that, seeing as that seems a bit over-the-top to me. (The arrow speed seems fine, though. I'll probably keep that.)