[quote=Schradinger] Vordak pretty well covered my concerns. For the ice arrow, a temperature should be used, rather than the absolute statement "freezes all creatures". The same goes for the blinding. A method of how it blinds them needs to be specified. And having the lightning strike the nearest hero means you could just shoot it into the ground at the beginning of the match and your opponent would get hit by a lightning bolt every ten seconds for as long as they survive (since there's no time limit on how many bolts it calls, which is also an issue). That falls into Notdeadyet's OP category. Honestly, The only one of Skallagrim's edits that made your character more powerful was the arrow flight speed. I'm not sure where this idea that his edits are OP is coming from. I'm also not sure why a character specializing in ranged attacks has iron hard skin, but meh. It's not something that breaks the character so whatevs. :P P.S. 1 Million volts is about a thousandth of the voltage in your typical lightning strike, but it will still flash-fry a human. 1 Million amperes would be about ten times the power in your average lightning strike. I'd just say that it hits with the power of an average lightning strike (1 billion volts and 100,000 amps). Which sounds like a lot (and it is), but humans have survived it before, so I don't feel that it would fall into the auto-kill category. [/quote] I'll get a temp for the ice arrow. Blinding i'll have to think on it for a bit. And the lightning strike thing, it was kinda implied it lasts as long as the rainstorm. I was kinda dumb to think that though. For iron hard skin, everyone has to have good defence, otherwise we'd all die once one hit gets landed. "Flash-fry a human" We arent humans so :P