Prince, I know that I'm not accepted yet, but since no one else is online to tell you so, I definitely suspect that your character is far and above his power budget.
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[*]Age 14[/*]
[*]Blocking force usage is probably a big nono. It's a very player-unfriendly move which strays into controlling other people's characters far too easily.[/*]
[*]His weaknesses aren't really weaknesses at all. It takes a lot of effort to turn "charismatic" into a flaw, but it looks like that's what you're trying to do.[/*]
[*]You give him a lot of skills (and one "flaw") for what short time he was with his family. If he was with his family long enough to learn diplomacy and how to be a leader, then how has he been in Jedi training long enough to be any good?[/*]
[*]At age 5 he was strong enough to block a Jedi Knight's Force? At age ten he was "stronger than most 30-year-old humans in the Force?" Being a prodigy is one thing, but being a Jedi Master at the age of 5-10 is another thing entirely.[/*]
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Just keep that in mind if you get rejected; I didn't see your first draft, but these bits are likely to cause you trouble.

Edit: Alright, I've read everything except for some of Celeste's history section; I should have a character up some time tomorrow!