[quote=Jeddaven]
No outstanding issues so far, but I do have to agree that detail can get a bit too excessive. It's not that the writing is bad, per se, it's just long-winded.I'll be posting a more detailed response in about an hour.
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Per se would imply you do think it is 'bad'. 
It's long for sure but long winded is something else entirely. If I remain in the RP I'll be posting several thousand word posts on a regular basis. I wouldn't have presumed that'd have been an issue.

Edit:
Look things have already got a sour air. Clearly there's a large difference of opinion here and there's no point moving forward. Consider me out. 

I'll start own of my own, as I normally did. 
That said no hard feels and I wish you all the sucess with the RP.