[quote=Xaltwind]
Hm, hm... Let's see...1) <Given her age, Sera would've had to been younger than 7 yhears old when the Royal Family picked her up, as you stated she was educated, trained and cared for for a time prior to the princess being born, and Sera is only 7 years older than Solia. This is not an issue in and of itself, I just found it ... strange?2) If the Royal Family entrusted Sera with the duty of protecting the Princess, she would have had to join the Royal Guard and become an official member of it. If she was to remain as just an 'adopted daughte of the Royal Family', she would technically be a Princess - but seeing as she has no blood-ties to the family, and no claim to the throne - or anything else for that matter - that isn't really a viable option. Hence, she would have to have a title and official post in order to be allowed to carry out her duty.3) I said this earlier in the OOC, but weapon specialization means SPECIALIZATION. Pole-arms and swords is too broad, for you don't use a bardiche the same way you use a spear, and you don't use a short sword the same way you use a zweihander. Please specify what weapons, exactly, she is trained with.4) Not sure how familiar you are with Dog Days, but remember that War-games are non-lethal - just saying this since you specifically mentioned that your Special Attack causes wounds, which it would only be able to do in low/no-Frala zones. Again, this is not something that needs editing or changing, just mentioning this for safety reasons.Aside from these tidbits, it looks just fine. Fix the tiny smidgeons and we'll get Sera ready to jump into the IC as well. :)
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Ok for the first point that was probably poor wording on my part, but Sera was a little girl when she was taken in by the royal family, Chronologically, she was being raised by their kindness while the princess was a baby. She might have been taken in by them like a year, or even less, before the princess was born. I didn't want to make my background too long so I didn't go into that much detail, but she would have been given the unofficial role of watching over Solia when she was a teenager, but even before that they were raised together.

As for the second point, Sera has no claim on the throne because she was never actually adopted by the King and Queen, they just took her in. This is why, aside from being something akin to a childhood playmate/confidant/unofficial protector, Sera's closest official rank would be Royal Ward. A Ward being a child raised and educated by the crown's good graces. So her Bodyguard position isn't an official title, but rather a duty shes taken on after being asked to by the King.

The third and forth points are simple matters to fix up.