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Name: Illi Luca DahnGender: MaleSpecies: HumanAge: 17Homeworld: Courascant Personality: Luca is a somewhat dull young boy. He doesn’t tend to speak unless spoken to, of course with a few exceptions. He’s a sharp and perceptive brat, sometimes getting on people’s nerves by sounding like a smartass, though his visage never gives off any emotion that would suggest he was looking down on anyone. He can be insubordinate from time to time, taking actions on his own without the consent of his master when he thinks the orders given to him are flawed.He’s quite patient, able to meditate for several hours without being distracted. Though, when his limit breaks, he becomes rather violent, still keeping his annoyed and cold demeanour about.Flaws: Although he’s generally calm and collected, Luca can have violent outbursts from time to time. This makes his fighting style rather predictable since he simply lashes out without any complex technique that could be created using the seventh form. These outbursts originate from his prolonged exposition to the dark side of the force during his childhood. His silent demeanour usually makes him unsociable.Skills: Luca is quite nimble thanks to his physique. Though most jedi are capable of achieving great acrobatic feats, Luca’s greatest virtue in close combatEquipment: He carries a hidden under his cloak.Force Abilities: Luca spent quite a bit of time training his skills in the ways of the force; almost as much as he did training with his lightsaber. At the academy, he mastered simple force tricks like Force Push and Force Jump, though he got better at some more than others, learning advanced techniques like Force Heal. During his time with he mastered the Art of Movement during his time as a padawan as his fighting style was highly dependant on his ability to move around freely. From his master, he learned the stance and meditation technique "Center of Being" to further his development in the ways of the force and to increase his skill as a swordsman, and learned a handy trick which he has yet to master, the Buried Concealment. Personal History: Illi Luca Dahn had been at the Jedi Temple ever since he could remember. During his time as an initiate, he was a rather ideal student. Not in the way that he was good at anything but rather because of his eagerness to learn. Outside of class, however, he tended to be somewhat insubordinate. It wasn’t really that he tried to start trouble, but rather that he simply didn’t care enough about what his instructors told them to do. Of course, he never got to the point where they’d get "infuriated" with him, though this was partly because the instructors had quite a bit of patience, and he was skilled at pushing that patience right to the limit before doing whatever he was told to.Luca spent most of his time either training with his swordsmanship or the ways of the force. He wasn’t really the type to make friends and bonds.Around the time he turned thirteen, for the second time, Luca entered the Jedi Temple Apprentice Tournament. The first time he’d entered, which was two years before, he hadn’t made it past the first round, giving him the motivation to train more and more until he felt ready to get a better result. During his fights, he got the attention of a jedi knight who’d later on become his master.Once he became a padawan, his master spent a lot of time teaching the reckless and impatient boy to overcome these flaws. Though Luca resisted quite a bit, in the end, he became as the knight wanted.Today, Luca is staying at the temple while his master is on his own mission, the boy unbeknownst of the betrayal against the jedi and his teacher.Additional Info: Sorry for the anime thing in the appearance but because I couldn’t find anything, I drew it.
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Too many and too strong abilities for a Padawan Learner, and you barely explain learning any off them. It's better than it was before, just need to flesh it. The more powers you have the more explanation, the rarer the power also contributes to this.