Firstly... MY GOD THE WALL!!! Secondly... Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to have a GM who not only points out my errors reasonably, but also offers constructive attempts to work around them. I applaud you sir. I apologise for my oversight regarding age and the term mutant, I did read the whole of the opening post but I did so while half asleep and probably should have re-read it XD. In terms of age I was intending her to be around that age yes, but I wasn't too sure as I didn't know how it would affect everyone else, I also forgot to clarify it as I am used to there being an age entry in apps, easily remedied though. It certainly wasn't as clear in the app as it could have been. Regarding Ms. Marvel, yes that works perfectly for me, I wasn't too sure quite how old Peter was, seeing how much crap has been heaped upon him, but I understand now. I also did not intend her and Peter to have had a relationship, merely that she had feelings towards him, your second point rather than your first, which is still entirely possible, I'm sure many people have been in that position throughout their lives. However, do you propose that the teenage Carol Danvers has a crush on Peter but does not know his secret identity, or that Ms. Marvel has a crush on Spidey but does not know that he is Peter? And don't worry, I brought an umbrella ;)