[quote=tsubasa]
Rapunzel
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Hey honey, I've read over your CS for Rapunzel and there are a few things that I would like you to have a second look at if it's okay. Please know that I'm not trying to be mean or bitchy or anything, and if I come across in that way, I apologize greatly.

- If the witch who stole Rapunzel away when she was a child sided with the Dark Queen then there would be no need for them to flee to earth; siding with the Queen would have given her power over the people and would have helped her to take over and rule just as the other villains did. Also with the portals closing after the children were sent away, there would be no way for the witch to get Rapunzel to earth unless she was in possession of one of the four amulets.
- The Prince in which Rapunzel was supposed to fall in love with would have befallen one of two fates depending on his royal parents. IF they got him out in time he would have traveled to earth at a young age like the other children and as he grew up he would have forgotten about his past. If they DIDN'T get him out on time he would have been enslaved by the villains and put to work in one way or another.
- With the Prince befalling one of the two fates above, they would have had to met when they were children, before the attack caused panic and mayhem throughout the lands.
- Also she needs to either be three years younger than eight (<- if you want her to be eighteen when she's older) or three years older than eighteen (<- if you want her to be eight when she's younger), cause it's set thirteen years after the Dark Queen took over with the villains.

Again, I'm really sorry if I come off as mean and bitchy, I don't mean to at all...