[hider=My Character!] [B]Name:[/B] Xbalanque [B]Class:[/B] Archer [B]Gender:[/B] Female [B]Appearance:[/B] [IMG]http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100201022532/dothack/images/9/9a/BlackRose_(LINK).jpg[/IMG] [B]Birth and Death Dates:[/B] Not known, people guess she lived and died in the 10th century. [B]Alignment:[/B] Chaotic Neutral. [B]Personality:[/B] Xbalanque, or Bal, as she likes to be called, is easygoing and laid back, but she also has a really, really sense of justice, though if a bit distorted. She isn't the kind of girl to let an injustice just pass by, and she will do anything in her power to see justice be done, making the perpetrator pay with the same coin. Bossy and also childish, she could be better described as a grown child more often than not. Still, she enjoys the little things of life and also has a great appetite, as well as a great deal of stamina, which she must use up before even thinking of going to sleep. Hyperactive by nature, she also likes to pester people and get on their nerves. While Bal may at first seem dumb because of the way she behaves, one should not be deceived by this, as she is rather cunning and sly. If given the opportunity, she can even be able to manipulate and coerce people into doing things that seem ridiculous or over the top. Inversely, when she uses her Noble Phantasm, Popol Vuh, Hunahpu, her 'twin', is more reserved and calculating, being a total contrast to Bal. [B]Bio:[/B] Xbalanque is the hero of the Mayan tale, Popol Vuh, where she defeated the Lords of the Underworld, Xibalba, in a ball game, to avenge her father and uncle. She also defeated a demon bird using only a blowgun, along with its kin, as well as transforming her half-brothers into Howler Monkey Gods, patrons of artists and scribes. The tale says that, at the end, she became the sun and moon both. However, as stated by herself, there was a misconception about her legend, saying that rather than only one woman, Xbalanque, there were actually a pair of male twins, Xbalanque and Hunahpu, who then turned into the sun and moon. Hence, through this misconception, one of her Noble Phantasms was born. Xbalanque, since she was always the protagonist, or at least, the one more under the spotlight, in all of their depictions, became the actual Heroic Spirit, rather than her 'brother', Hunahpu. Her 'death' was symbolised by their ascension from Xibalba to the surface after reconstructing her father from his ashes, just to find out that he was only a shell of what he was before. After reassuring him that he would be prayed upon, she headed back to the surface, but didn't stop there and continued on ascending until reaching the sky and becoming the sun and moon. [B]Weapon:[/B] [I]Mayan Hunt Bow:[/I] She uses an ancient Mayan bow to attack, with no special properties whatsoever, but her accuaracy is deadly. [I]Blowgun:[/I] Hunahpu, instead of using a bow like Bal, he uses a blowgun, with which he killed the demon bird. The dards he uses are filled with a deadly, paralizing poison. [B]Parameters:[/B] [*]Strength: D[/*] [*]Endurance: A[/*] [*]Agility: B[/*] [*]Mana: E[/*] [*]Luck: A+[/*] [B]Class Skills:[/B] [*]Independent Action: A+[/*] [*]Magic Resistance: C[/*] [B]Personal Skills:[/B] [*]Bravery: A (Unaffected by mental states like confusion or enragement.)[/*] [*]Discernment of the Poor: C (Ability to see the weaknesses of her opponents.)[/*] [B]Noble Phantasm(s):[/B] [B]Name:[/B] Xibalba, Land Of The Dead. [B]Title:[/B] "Ballcourt Of The Underworld." [B]Rank:[/B] A+ [B]NP Type:[/B] Anti-Army. [B]Maximum Number of Targets:[/B] 10 [B]Description:[/B] A Reality Marble, Bal can imprison her enemies in there. Inside the Reality Marble, there is an ancient Ballcourt, where Bal defeated the Lords of the Underworld, and then ascended to the skies and became the sun and moon. As so, in the Reality Marble, an infinite number of balls is produced. While seemingly not dangerous, the balls are bladed and can decapitate any normal person in their way. In the middle of the court, there's also a pair of rock balls, that can only be moved by Bal herself. When kicked by her, one of the balls catches fire and is able to go through any kind of magical armor, and the other one can freeze an opponent instantly. After using both balls, the Reality marble disappears, as using both takes all of her prana out. [CENTER][IMG]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs12/i/2006/271/7/b/random_guy_i_designed_by_chidacheese.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] [B]Name:[/B] Popol Vuh, Legend Of The Twins. [B]Title:[/B] "Hunahpu, One-Blowgunner." [B]Rank:[/B] E [B]NP Type:[/B] Anti-Unit (Self) [B]Maximum Number of Targets:[/B] - [B]Description:[/B] Hunahpu, Bal's brother in the myth, can be summoned by Bal. While he is also a Servant in essence, he and Bal are one and the same, so they only count as one person, but Hunahpu also has his own set of stats which are all half of Bal's own stats. He uses a blowgun as his weapon. While he is out, Bal's stats are also halved.[/hider] Here is my character! I'm gonna go over some things with BB, so this ain't her final form! ;P But speaking seriously, any kind of criticism is well received!