Okay. Just a few discrepancies Cale.
Firstly. We would appreciate a second name, as most Imperials do in fact own one.
The Empire follows the ancient roman Ranking system. The rank of knight didn't exist. However, you can come up with a separate order within the empire, and explain this if you wish.
And finally what's his attraction to Dragonsbane?
Deal with these and you may be accepted :D