RockFace, a couple problems with that last post. First, I could taste the metagaming, and there was also a hit of god modding. First, you controlled the soldier, saying he was conscious and awake, without discussin it with Yugeto. Sometimes tiny scenes like that are allowed to be RP'd by someone else, but not when it completely destroys what the character was doing. Second, your character, a young 15 yr old gymnast, is suddenly super suspicious about the second girl who approached her and saved her? Your suspicion is drawn from the fact that you probably read Okani's CS or previous posts. This is called META GAMING.

It means your characters know something about the world because YOU (the roleplayer) know it. It's not good (for example, I know the entire military's plans CUZ I'm writing them, but it would be really dumb to have one of my characters suddenly know them too, and thwart the entire army).

B'a suspicion of Ciara IS kind of uncalled for but if you want B to be paranoid I'll let it slip, but the suspicion that the soldier and the girl are ONE is completely meta gaming.

You're new so I understand, trust me. You'll get better and things like this won't happen! But if you wouldnt mind editing your post I would appreciate that.