[quote] Mageblood type:Enalais [/quote] Needs a Mageblood, not your name no matter how cute it is. :P 

[quote] Good Attributes: Korgal is a kind and sweet orc he loves everybody he meets and is quick to make friends, his loyalty to his friends is a good trait as well as a bad trait he will keep his friends safe until the end but he can easily be manipulated by people through his loyalty.

Bad Attributes: Going back to his loyalty, he also will not fight any living thing unless it's hurt one of his friends, he isn't easily provoked for an orc and his peaceful ways tend to get him into all sorts of troubles. [/quote] 

I suggest tacking on one or two more bad traits, possibly another good one, as well as a request for me personally. Would you mind separating them a bit, like into a point bulletin, to make it slightly easier for me to tell them apart? Please and thank you. 

Other then that, I really don't see any farther concerns. Though what Korgal did with turning his fist to solid ice is possible but it would leave him drained, even when driven into high emotion, which is something to note for the future.