[quote=Raijinslayer]
Oh well, looks cool though. In other fate related news, ave any opinions about my Master or Servant. While their pretty much set in stone as they are right now, I want to have some feedback on them, as I like hearing other peoples opinions on the characters I make.
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Your servant seems fine but your master seems a bit over the top to me. I mean there are some masters that can defeat servants, like Kairi and Bazett but they actual can't hold their own verse servants in a regular fight.