A couple of things stand out to me about your character. Firstly, he doesn't seem to have an [url=http://disgaea.wikia.com/wiki/Evility]evility[/url] (you can take one from the list or make up your own, if you'd rather), which is kind of necessary. Secondly, I'm not sure if this is what you were going for or not, but I'm not sure how kind a Disgaea setting will be to an aloof badass character.