Also:

If you try to control EVERYONE all across the island by bringing them there and NONE of them, even if their natures is based on killing, ever raised a hand against each other. EmFell alone would just sit on everybody, or break peoples' necks from him bumping into others with wingbones, legs, feet, etc.

Don't do that. Also, you might wanna use a spellchecker- it'll help with your spelling.